- While people liked the image and the message, there appeared to be a little confusion regarding the interpretation of the main tagline. I intended it to be a cynical poke at a victim blaming culture of violence in order to highlight the issue, instead some people interpreted it as almost threat like? In light of this, I think simplifying the text to something more blatant and straightforward will clear this up for those people who have a very shallow knowledge on topics such as domestic violence.
Poster 2 - panacea
- People seemed divided over the colours, some wanted to see it a lighter color to make it more medical/healthy feeling, others liked the bright saturation I chose. I think I will stick with the more saturated almost sick looking green as this makes the tone a bit more unsettling. The medicine draws you in, but the monster / putrid looking green makes you second guess if it will really help you or harm you. This further helps the idea of the flag change merely being a panacea that won't really fix the main issues with our society.
- It was suggested that I try to make the White pills pop a little bit more by bringing out their whiteness a bit better against the other colors in the image.
- The use of the red star on the pill can have other meanings than just the flags southern cross i.e. Communism. Perhaps try replace this with another symbol i.e. a fern.
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